Ewa Barnes

48 posts

Feedback on peer review

Hi Everyone,

I’ve looked at your drafts and peer reviews. It looks like nearly everyone who submitted their draft received feedback, often from multiple people, which is great. Answering the 10 peer review questions for each draft allowed you to …

Week 11

Hi Everyone, and welcome to Week 11: Breathe and Revise. At this point, you have, hopefully, provided and received feedback about your essay drafts–or are still working on that today and tonight. You have also conducted more research and submitted …

Midterm week feedback

Hi Everyone,

Thanks for your midterm exams. Overall, they were great, and show that you are ready for the second part of the semester. In several cases, I’ve asked for more information, if your answer seemed incomplete and/ or confusing. …

Peer Review Oct 30-Nov 6

Your outline should include the following:

  • your topic
  • your thesis/ conclusion
  • your premises and evidence/ sources

Your draft should include the following:

  • Your working thesis statement/ conclusion
  • At least 3 body paragraphs, each with a premise and supporting evidence, including