For this week I’m continuing with the project. I’ve added a few pictures not in all links.
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Introduction to Video Game Design
Introduction to Video Game Design
For this week I’m continuing with the project. I’ve added a few pictures not in all links.
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The images look good. The post formatting could use some work. The images are small in the gallery view, I would just layout each image on a separate line.
The written description is not very clear. “For this week I’m continuing with the project.” This doesn’t really tell us anything, this is obvious.
“I’ve added a few pictures not in all links.” This sentence is not well structured, which makes it confusing. I think what you mean is that you have added images to some of the passages, but not all of them. Try to make the writing clear and descriptive.