I added more branching options in the story and also added images to provide more context to the environment in which it takes place.
A few choices have different outcomes when a player takes an action, but loop back into the overarching story to stay consistent and have a cleaner board without needing several of the same passages over and over.
Looks good, looks like an interesting story structure.
Don’t forget to include image citations, or if you created the image credit yourself.