For my edits to my original post, I added normalization on my voice recording, and the sounds of the bartender pouring drinks to take out some of the high peaks. For the background jazz music, I used the equalizer and changed the default to old radio type for a nostalgic, vintage feel. I also added a couple sounds, one of a champagne bottle being opened and poured. The other one was a glasses clinking that I had to speed up so it sounded more like a toast.
Sources: “Champagne: Cork Pop and Pour” by ultradust https://freesound.org/people/ultradust/sounds/166923/ Creative Commons License Attribution 4.0
“Dinner Bell.wav” by Daniel Rousseau https://freesound.org/people/DanielRousseau/sounds/366779/ Creative Commons License Attribution NonCommercial 3.0
“Crowd Noise” by tnturner https://freesound.org/people/tnturner/sounds/713539/ Creative Commons License CC0
“Bottle Alcohol Manipulation And Pouring Into Glass With Ice 1.wav” by Sunno33 https://freesound.org/people/Sunno33/sounds/581664/ Creative Commons License CC0
“Jazzy Vibes #81 – Jazz Piano Medley” by Tri-Tachyon https://freesound.org/people/Tri-Tachyon/sounds/541689/ Creative Commons License Attribution 4.0
Nice work, the effects on the jazz music work well to make the other sounds stand out more in the mix.