Hi guys!
This is my progress in Game Maker. I’ve added two rooms so far. I changed my character because the one I had was deleted, and I didn’t want to start over because it would set me back.
GameMaker progress 2
Author: carol varon
Bitsy Final Project
Hello, this is my game Bitsy Echoes of the Moon. I published it a little late on itch.io, so I wasn’t able to get any feedback. I don’t know if you can try it out and tell me what I should improve, it would help me a lot.
GameMaker 1
Hi guys!
This is my character for this project. His name is Nyx. I’m still not sure how the game will develop, but I like the character.
Bitsy Game Rooms
These are some of the rooms. I still have a long way to go, but I want to add a lot of detail to each one. I hope you like it
Bitsy Game Progress
Hello guys!
My game is about a bat named Nuba. He is a small bat who has lost his colony after a storm. The full moon guides him as he crosses a mysterious forest to find his family. Along the way, he must collect echo fragments, which allow him to remember clues about the way back.
In his search, he encounters an enigmatic cat who seems to know more than he lets on.
The cat appears at different moments, giving clues, posing challenges, or simply… observing.
Twine Final- carol
Hi, this is the link to my twine story https://valentina-aa.itch.io/jimmys-story Thank you for your feedback, it helped me a lot.
Summary: The feedback mentioned that the story was really strong overall, with clear good, bad, and neutral endings and a nice sense of tension that made the choices feel important. However, you also pointed out that the story switched between first, second, and third person, which made it a bit confusing, so it was better to keep everything in second person to make it more immersive. You also suggested giving more context to Jimmy’s voice, explaining how he can talk to the player, and adding some small connections between the different endings so they feel part of the same world. Lastly, you recommended giving a few more clues about the mysterious figure. These things were improved by rewriting the story completely in second person, making Jimmy an inner voice or alter ego trapped in the player’s mind, connecting the endings through subtle echoes, and adding small hints about the figure and the psychological link between Jimmy and the main character.
Twine Progress-Carol Varon
This is my progress. I added more paths. I want to have different endings to make it much more fun. Some of them repeat depending on the decisions that are taken.
Carol’s Twine Story
My story is about a boy named Jimmy who wakes up in a very strange and scary place after losing consciousness. He will have to find a way out, but… will he succeed? I’m still working on it.
My Intro
My name is Carol Varon, My Major is Animation and Motion graphics. 🙂 I would like to work in roles such as Animator or Graphic Designer in Video games
