Summary
What is a fallacy?
A fallacy is when you are in a disagreement with someone else because of their own opinions!
Topic: religions discrimination /gender /human rights
Working conclusion: how everyone should not have to fight for equality.
Intro: (hook, intro to topic, conclusion)
Premise 1: people who are religious should be able to wear their culture.
Supporting Evidence: In an article I read talked about the laws against harassment towards people who are religious therefore they spoke on if someone is wearing a hijab people would be rude about it and make them feel uncomfortable.
Premise 2: people who are religious or people that are different gender should be treated equally from other people who might not be religious.
Supporting Evidence: I read an article about how the national population people would refuse to help people due to their race, gender, meaning if they are in that LGBTQIA community and refuse to help people who are religious because they were Uncomfortable with their religion and didn’t want to help them because they disagreed with that.
Premise 3/ Opposing Viewpoint: Religion, gender and sexuality: Three points on freedom of religion or belief-
people should have the human rights to do what they want and believe in
Supporting Evidence: The article I was reading gave good examples on why we should analyze these conflicts and how to do justice to all claims. Because for example, people who want to get an abortion should get the Services to do so if they aren't ready to have a child.
Conclusion: (paraphrase your conclusion/thesis, and explain why this topic matters)
Please note that your essay can have more than 3 body paragraphs, and feel free to include more than 3 premises–either way, this will be a base for your draft.
1 body paragraph
Therefore, my idea on this whole thing is I believe that people who are in a religion should be able to express themselves because why do they deserve to be treated like they are not worth anything and how would is that human rights and freedom of speech. They should be able to use their voice and not feel like they are different from other people and people should mind their own business because it should not bother them those people were raised in that culture and belief. and people who are a different race should be treated equally and not be looked differently because of their skin tone. The same with people who like the same gender or want to be a different gender it's not their interested in you so they should leave them alone and let be free to do whatever they want, and I believe that personally for me everyone should not have the fear of being hate crime or killed or either catcalled by men who respectful can't keep it in their pants and just say things that came in their mind without knowing that it can make people uncomfortable . However, I do not like seeing people on the news get killed or beat up for no reason because of people in this world who are just so hateful, and they have no reason behind it, and I do not want to say it is because of how them were raised but sometimes it is because of that. People who do hate crimes, felonies, murders, abusers were raised poorly but it is not only the parents but people you are around too that can be bad influencers.
2 body paragraphs
Nevertheless, I would like to add on people who died that were in the LGBTQIA who were identified as transgender kylie Monali she was 41 trans women who died because her cellmate killed her on September 7, 2022. another case is a women named Caelee love-light she was a 27-year-old Latin, and she was killed in Phoenix, Arizona December 17, 2022. Daniel Aston, a 28-year-old transgender man that was killed in the Club Q mass shooting in Colorado Springs on November 20, 2022. I believe that all these people who have lost their lives for no reason it is upsetting that people die because of either being killed or being targeted at, mind you these people have family so people lost their loved ones because of other people wrong actions. And not only that most of these killings happened last year so many people who were transgender or just in the LGBTQIA in general died because people just could not understand the fact that this is a new world were people are into different genders or same gender and that should not be crime to be into someone of the same sex.
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Now for people who were black that were killed by either police officers or just in shootings the first one we have Daunte wright who was only 20 when he was killed in 2021 Daunte was in the car with his girlfriend and wright was stopped by the police officers for traffic violence , police tried to detain him for an outstanding warrant and when he was resisting and try to go back to his call an officer named Kim potter shot him as he was just trying to go in his car and the police said that she meant to take a taser out and not a gun and she was charged with second degree murder . Another victim we have is André hill he was 47-year-old black man who was just emerged from a garage and holding up cellphone in his left hand, office Adam coy shot André hill and handcuff him and he way lay on the ground for five minutes and 11 seconds till he was dead and officer Adam coy was fired hours after. Another case is George Floyed he was 46 and was killed because of an allegedly tried to use a countified 20$ bill and he was handcuffed to the ground by an officers named Derek Chauvin put his neck for nine minutes and 29 seconds and he would not let go of his knee on his neck even when he became unresponsive and two autopsy reports listed Floyed listed death as homicide. Therefore, all officers were fired, and officer Chauvin was arrested April 20, 2021, for second- and third-degree murder. And another victim was Stephon Clark, and he was only 22 years old, and he was standing in his grandmother's backyard and cops thought he had a gun and shot him 20 times mind you he was only holding a cellphone.
Therefore, in my conclusion these people who have died were just human beings just trying to make a living and survive in this chaotic society and most of them had partners and children so now people have lost either their parents or son or daughter which is upsetting. That is why I believe everyone should be treated equally because even if you have different opinions on what side you like or hate you should not be treated with injustice.
Ciara Cintron
