Hello this is the Link to my twine story game https://chelseaf24.itch.io/rewindingtime Full name is Going back 10 years ago
So in class I received some good feedback from what people liked from my story to giving me tips on how to fix some parts of my story like some sentences In my story. A quick summary of my story is about a storm that comes in town and the MC is home terrified because a random strange storm came they tried contacting people during the storm but no one seemed to have been responding so they go to sleep and hope for the best they end up waking up and then realize they are 10 years in the past of the present and they are shocked they went back in time in their old house with their mother which they never thought to see again but they went back in time in a horrible time period when they were young so they pick up a paper which has the simple answer in going back or they refuse to take it and not go back. I ended up changing some parts from the beginning mostly the grammar of some parts so it can make sense same with the title to “Going back ten years ago.”
Overall the feedback I got helped me in organizing my storyline and just keeping it simple I appreciated the people who gave me tips and what to improve with but overall I had fun in making this mini story in class! https://itch.io/jam/twine-jam-mmp-270-fall-2025/rate/3921024
