A.I. Here, There, Everywhere + Bing’s A.I. Chat: ‘I Want to Be Alive
Today we are going to talk about two articles from the New York Times magazine.The first article is going to be the “A.I. Here, There, Everywhere” by Craig Smith who is going to talk about the decline of AI in our world and its effects on us, will present the good things as well as the problematic sides.The second article “I want to be alive” by Kevin Roose will be also about AI but presents it in a different way, from a different point of view.
AI is already in our lives in many aspects even if we notice it or not.It is in a very developing stage but is still in its initial stage, the brightest and greatest part is yet to come. It is true that it will become an integral part of our lives, and it already is, but in the future, it will be even more so. But the biggest problem we are facing right now is the violation of privacy that the system requires to be able to develop. We are currently trying to work on new methods in which they can use our data without completely damaging our private lives. The ai is already everywhere related to us, whether it is outside or at home but very soon it will develop to the level of face recognition and body recognition.In this way, she will be able to identify diseases and even assist in recovery because of identifying them early. In this way, she will be involved in our environment both comprehensively and personally for everyone. It already fully exists in the world of music, the world of television and streaming in very large companies that most of us know and use the services of these companies every day.Since ai works very similar to the human brain, it basically copies a thought, this causes the development of emotional intelligence and makes it very human. She will be able to create songs, develop personal conversations, simulate people who exist and do not exist. With its development and becoming more emotional and more realistic and the more two-dimensional it was, it could also enter the world of education to provide content and strategies to the world of students in a personal form that is adapted to each student. Right now, it touches and will touch every aspect of our lives such as education, health, medicines even the world of harvesting.It will make what we thought was impossible very possible and even beyond what we imagined, it was created and will develop to help us grow and reach places we never thought of.
The second article Bing’s Ai chat by the author Kevin Roose is about a conversation between an a Microsoft chat bot named “Bing” and Kevin the author of the article.The article describes a conversation that starts as a professional conversation, part of a test by Microsoft as an initial experience in using this chat bot. The conversation describes “Bing’s” reaction when Kevin starts asking her “personal” questions and not questions she is supposed to be asked. Finally he finds himself in front of a computer robot who “falls in love” with him and leaves him in a very problematic situation.Just the day before, his opinions about “Bing” were positive and following this conversation that led to the insights that “Bing” or “Sydney” are beginning to develop emotion and self-thinking, he changed his mind about it. He was even very frightened for a moment and remained stunned after this whole conversation.
So true, both articles talk about ai but they both approach it in a different way. The first article is based on research and presents the impact of AI on our lives, on where we are today and how it can harm us, for example privacy damage due to the use of data. The second article is based on the personal experience of the author of the article with an AI system, with a chat bot. He tells how “Bing” changed direction and he started to feel threatened and scared of the system. In my opinion, anything that is too extreme is bad. I think that it is important to exhaust the AI and use it for the uses that come up for us, but not to try to replace it with humans. And if we as humans encounter a situation like Kevin’s, then I hope they stop it in time. I think that yes, it can prevent traffic accidents, save human lives, make it easier for us, but when is the line crossed? Are we willing to give up our privacy for this thing? Therefore, in my opinion, it should be used in addition to and not instead of humans and know where the border is crossed.
4 thoughts on “Draft Comparative Essay – By Mariana”
Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
She did introduce but there is no hook
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
Yes there is a summary of that article
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
Yes there is a summary of that article
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
Yes the summaries include hey ideas from each text
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
She is used her own words
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
Yes there an anAlysis of both
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
At the beginning she just mentioned the tittles
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
No I didn’t find it while reading
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
Yes she avoid it
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
It is clear and have pertinent ideas
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
To add an introduction with a hook and a conclusion
1. Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
yes, there is an introduction and a hook. The two articles are presented in different ways. The introduction hook is later explained at the end of the draft, the difference is explained as “research” and “personal experience”.
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
yes, the draft summarizes “A.I. Here, There, Everywhere”.
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
yes, the draft summarizes “I want to be alive”
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
some of the key ideas from the text added in the summery are the privacy of personal data, facial and body movement recognition, and chat bots used to by large companies to interact with humans.
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
no, the summaries are stated in Marianas words, with authors examples.
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
yes, the drafts included an analysis by Mariana stating her on view on the overall topics, that A.I. can be very useful but should not replace humans.
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
I don’t recognize any exact quotes except for the titles.
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
yes, Mariana worded and analyzed the drafts in her own words.
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
Yes, everything in Maraina’s draft was relevant to the articles.
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
Marina’s draft simplifies and clarifies the articles points.
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
I think Mariana’s draft was very well written.
1. Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
Yes it does include an introduction and also there is a hook. The first sentence is the hook which grabs the reader attention to read more about the draft. ” Today we are going to talk about two articles from the New York Times magazine”
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
Yes , the summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”? is the first paragraph but a little bit longer.
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
Yes, the second paragraph is the summary.
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
For the first summary the key idea is “But the biggest problem we are facing right now is the violation of privacy that the system requires to be able to develop” which explains and give more attention for the reader to read the summary to understand better and for the second summary is “The conversation describes “Bing’s” reaction when Kevin starts asking her “personal” questions and not questions she is supposed to be asked” which leads to the idea of what kind of answer will AI chatbox answer.
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
Both summaries are stated in the author’s word but the second essay is more.
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
Yes it does , the last paragraph explains and analyze both articles and the difference between them. “The first article is based on research and presents the impact of AI on our lives, on where we are today and how it can harm us, for example privacy damage due to the use of data”, and “The second article is based on the personal experience of the author of the article with an AI system, with a chat bot. He tells how “Bing” changed direction and he started to feel threatened and scared of the system”.
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
yes it does, “The conversation describes “Bing’s” reaction when Kevin starts asking her “personal” questions and not questions she is supposed to be asked. Finally he finds himself in front of a computer robot who “falls in love” with him and leaves him in a very problematic situation”.
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
The third sentence and the second sentence for the paragraph 2 and for the paraghrap 1 is first and second.
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
Yes it avoid the plagiarisim. It is the first sentence of the second paraghraph “The second article Bing’s Ai chat by the author Kevin Roose is about a conversation between an a Microsoft chat bot named “Bing” and Kevin the author of the article.”
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
The strenghts for this draft are , the clearnes, the opinion, the writing , I would say the accuracy.
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
I have a suggestion only for the first paragraph which might be a little bit longer for the rest it is very good draft.
Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
yes she made it. She use same sentence from article.
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
Yes. the summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”? in first paragraph
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
Yes we can see ” I want to be alive” sentence.
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
Yes the summaries include key idea in each paragraph and she use all different way.
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
She took some words from original but she mad it for explain better.
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
Yes and she use for support her idea too.
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
yes here; “The conversation describes “Bing’s” reaction when Kevin starts asking her “personal” questions and not questions she is supposed to be asked. Finally he finds himself in front of a computer robot who “falls in love” with him and leaves him in a very problematic situation”.
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
I mean all draft as a analysis I think.
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
Yes she avoid it.
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
It is really part of part explain everything basically. It’s not too short and not too long and clear.
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
I thing she made it really good work.