As a young person I want to talk about some of my experience. Nature is kinda of what nobody choice about us. Could be body type, brain work, illness etc. When think about all the people around world everybody uniq in their personalty, family and ability. But I think outside factor which is nurture very effective in long term all life. As author saying family, and what kinda way our educated gave us from around can open very different way our life. I have a sister and we raised together but we had so much different experience too. Even same family treat us different because I was the little one she is older than me. Just that make us already different people. I believe we can have or have not some talent or barrier but how life and around teach us, help us or force us; good or bad way our capacity totally can effected and give us such a different personalty.
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2 thoughts on “Nature vs Nurture”
Good afternoon Irem,
I agree with you that we are all born with some diffrent attributes of personality, just like our physical features vary. I have twins and right from birth, personality differences were noticeable and have continued to distinguish with age even though their environment is the same for now. Next year they will start 3K and make friends and have outside influences on developing their personality.
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