Summary
knowledge where our behavior come from is something hard to tell because how we are and the way we act in life is something that it come from the nature or nurture. In the article ''Nature vs Nurture Debate'' Kendra Cherry,the author, present this two terms that are always present in our life how sometimes one can have more impact in us than the other. Cherry presents the nature vs nurture from it definition to how it is in the development of the personality,child development, and mental illness development. Nature vs Nurture have a relationship in the our life they are the opposite face of the same coin, it won't be possible that we grow up without interact with the nurture and the nature is in us for good or for bad and it will depend on our enviroment meaning our nurture.
3 thoughts on “Anibal Rodriguez”
1. Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
Yes, It start kinda of information about general knowledge
2. Does the draft include a summary?
Yes it is kinda of summary actually because it’s short paragraph have some basic info
3. Does the summary include key ideas from the text? Explain.
Yes, I think basic idea is ‘Cherry presents the nature vs nurture from it definition to how it is in the development of the personality,child development, and mental illness development.”
4. Is the summary stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
Kendra Cherry,the author, present this two terms that are always present in our life how sometimes one can have more impact in us than the other.
5. Does the draft include an analysis of the text? Explain.
Yes I think we can say last sentence is an analysis.
6.Does the draft include quotes from the text? Explain.
No I am not sure even include I couldn’t find because not specifically stated.
7.Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain. I think not any special quotes, it’s mostly look like general analysis
8.Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the article? Explain.
I am not sure
9.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
It based on a resource so that is make more valuable
10.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
Maybe need more specific details and informations
1. No it doesn’t include an introduction
2. yes, he just post a piece of summary
3. yes, he does explain the key idea by even mentioning the author of the article
3. Yes, kind of because he is explaining it based on his opinion of the text
5. Yes, but he is sharing his point of view
6. not exactly a sentence from the text but just the title which is ” nature vs Nurture ”
7. In his all summary he is explaining the duality between the two factors
8. Yes he did avoid it because all the ideas he developed were pertinent
9. the strength of this summary is that the author did understand the difference between nature and nurture
10. To improve this draft the author should develop his ideas and try to reformulate well his sentences
Good afternoon,
I completely agree with the way you termed “Impossible to grow up without the interaction of both Nurture and Nature”. To only be one or the other is impossible, and “Nurture and Nature are the two sides of the same coin”. Great connection.