- I feel like assignment 3 was my best work because I was able to express myself freely and was able to read a lot of poems that interested me and picked out the one i resonated with the best. I really like being able to decorate and organize my work the way I thought looked the best.
- I would say that in essay 1 I could have done much better if I had paid closer attention to the meaning and the directions given. I really liked the story but I didn’t really connect to the other material that had to be used in order to write the poem. If I had to do the assignment again I would pay more attention to the directions and make sure I read all the material closely.
- something i learned in class was to not use words that i think make me sound more intellectual in order to make my essay sound better because in a lot of cases it is better to be more specific when writing so the essay can sound more natural.
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2 thoughts on “Andreany Estevez – #15”
Great job reflecting on your work this semester. It’s clear that you’ve learned a lot from each assignment. I love how you found Assignment 3 to be a strong representation of your personal expression, and your awareness of areas to improve in Essay 1 shows great growth. Your realization about using simpler, more specific language will definitely enhance the clarity of your writing. Keep up the great work and continue learning from your experiences.
I especially like your comments to question 3. I think a lot of students make this mistake. Maybe you were even encouraged to write in this way in high school. I don’t know, but the whole idea of writing is to communicate, so the clearer the better.