- I feel like the most successful assignment that I did was essay 4. The reasoning why I feel like it was my most accomplished is because I made sure to try to quote things much better than I did before, I also believed that the primary source and secondary source prompts helped me connect better on my thesis on why I thought fairytales should be told.
2. I feel like I could have done better with essay 1, it was the first essay and I feel like I did not use proper quotations, I also know I had trouble with how to use proper citations as well.
3. I feel like one thing I learned from this course this semester was to be able to be to write a better thesis and correct wording. I also feel like I was able to be less wordy and more evidence to back up my thesis instead of fancy words.
2 thoughts on “DB 15 OScar orellana”
Great job reflecting on your growth this semester. It’s fantastic to hear that Essay 4 was your most successful assignment, especially with your improved quoting and stronger connection between sources and your thesis. Your recognition of the areas you could improve in Essay 1 shows great self-awareness. The progress you made with writing a clear thesis and focusing on evidence over unnecessary wording is impressive. Keep up the great work, and continue refining your skills
Oscar, it may sound simple, but having a clear thesis is the basis of a good essay. In fact, without a thesis, you don’t really have an essay. So if you leave this course knowing this, you are way ahead of the game!