Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
Yes, at the first 2 sentence.
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
I could not find a clear statement because most of the essay is an examples from the article.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
Yes, each paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis. For example par 2 begin with explanation about the student that route the article.
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
It’s mostly includes a summary of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Yes, for example: “Being an immigrant puts a barrier and a heavy load on their back. Working becomes
more draining then it should be and the wages are usually low.”
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
It’s mostly includes an analysis of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Yes because he explains the whole summary in his own words.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
It’ד includes a quotes of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
Yes, he literally copied a quote and then explained it.
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
No
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
Explains very well the opinion of the author of the article with analysis the article and the author idea.
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
To include the all 4 sources.
Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
yes, he include title and the author and the theses statement
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
yes, Youth views and beliefs are discarded and are not seen as important. However, immigrants and the youth community voices should be included in our national discussions about civic purpose.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
yes, there only one body paragraph but it start with immigrant daughter experience in USA
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
not everything
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
no
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
not everything
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
yes
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
the explanations
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
include the all four sources
3 thoughts on “immigrant”
Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
Yes, at the first 2 sentence.
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
I could not find a clear statement because most of the essay is an examples from the article.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
Yes, each paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis. For example par 2 begin with explanation about the student that route the article.
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
It’s mostly includes a summary of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Yes, for example: “Being an immigrant puts a barrier and a heavy load on their back. Working becomes
more draining then it should be and the wages are usually low.”
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
It’s mostly includes an analysis of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Yes because he explains the whole summary in his own words.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
It’ד includes a quotes of article “What Every American Should Know About the Immigrant Experience” by Araceli Hernandez.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
Yes, he literally copied a quote and then explained it.
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
No
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
Explains very well the opinion of the author of the article with analysis the article and the author idea.
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
To include the all 4 sources.
Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
yes, he include title and the author and the theses statement
Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.
yes, Youth views and beliefs are discarded and are not seen as important. However, immigrants and the youth community voices should be included in our national discussions about civic purpose.
Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.
yes, there only one body paragraph but it start with immigrant daughter experience in USA
Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1: Key Findings About U.S. Immigration, PEW Research Center + Source 2: “Competition from Within,” by Seth Eislund/ The Immigrant Story + Source 3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.
not everything
Are the summaries in the author’s own words? Provide an example.
Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.
no
Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.
Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.
Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
not everything
Does the author avoid plagiarism?
yes
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
the explanations
What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
include the all four sources