Summary
Artificial intelligence is already present in many aspects of our daily lives, controlling Internet connected devices, such as cellphones and security cameras in our house. Researchers are working on distilling large, heavy machine models into lightweight software that can run on small devices, which will personalize our with AI interactions. such as chatbots becoming truly conversational and developing personalities of their own. Privacy remains an issue, but researchers are developing methods to use data without actually seeing it or encrypting it in unhackable ways. AI also increasingly be used to monitor behavior for health and safety reasons. Researchers are working on avatars that will make AI interactive with humans. With advancements in A.I. technology, it may eventually be possible for anyone to create software by simply telling an A.I. system what they want it to do.
There are potential connections between AI and our lives, with AI appearing in media such as Netflix, where AI learns our hobbies and personalities to recommend movies we might like. The potential benefits of AI in healthcare, particularly for the elderly who live alone, where AI can help us monitor their behavior while they are at home alone. However, AI does not only improve our lives, it also intrudes on our privacy. However, researchers are working on ways to prevent our information from being hacked. On the other hand, will become more personalized and will eventually be integrated into smaller devices such as wearables and smart phone. Overall, AI has the potential to significantly improve our lives, but its development and implementation must be approached thoughtfully and responsibly.
Dingbaoer Liao
3 thoughts on ““A.I. Here, There, Everywhere.””
1. Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
No, it doesn’t have a hook.
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
It has a good summary of the article “AI Here, There, Everywhere”.
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
No, the draft doesn’t include any important idea from the article “I want to be alive”.
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
Even though it’s difficult to know if the idea in the draft are from the text or Bobo’s own words because she didn’t mentioned the article. I can see that she put key ideas from the text “AI Here, There, Everywhere”.
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
No, it looks like it’s on Bobo’s words.
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
No, it is a good summary of the article “AI Here, There, Everywhere” but does not include an analysis of it.
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
No. It does not have any quotation marks or mention.
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
No, I couldn’t see she mentioning the author.
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
There’s some ideas that looks like it wasn’t on the article so I’m assuming that are Bobo’s ideas and interpretation.
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
She has a very good summary of the article “AI Here, There, Everywhere”.
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.]
I would suggest that she include the summary of the other article “I want to be alive” and the use of words such as ” as the author stated” according to the article” to make it clear that the ideas are from. the articles. Also, mentioning the article and its author.
Does the draft include an introduction? Is there a hook? Explain.
No there is no introduction it just a two paragraph draft
2. Does the draft include a summary of “AI Here, There, Everywhere”?
No the author is just analizing the artificial intelligence theme
3. Does the draft include a summary of “I want to be alive”?
No there no summary of that article
But the author tried to talk about it
4. Do the summaries include key ideas from each text? Explain.
The author tried to talk about both theme in her paragraphs
5. Are the summaries stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
Yes the used her own words while analyzing
6. Does the draft include an analysis of both articles? Explain.
The author tried to do an analysis
7 Does the draft include quotes from both articles? Explain.
No there’s no quote
8. Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
No I didn’t find it
9. Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the articles? Explain.
Yes she is using her own word and also she analysing the theme that was mentioned in both articles
10.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
She has good arguments
11.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.
She need to be more clear and have some quotes from the articles and write the introduction conclusion
1. Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.
yes, because there are hook.
2. Does the draft include a summary?
Yes
3. Does the summary include key ideas from the text? Explain.
Yes,
4. Is the summary stated in the author’s own words? Explain.
no
5. Does the draft include an analysis of the text? Explain.
Yes, included an analysis of the text.
6.Does the draft include quotes from the text? Explain.
yes
7.Does the draft include the author’s analysis of the quotes? Explain.
no
8.Does the author avoid plagiarism by attributing relevant ideas to the article? Explain.
yes
9.What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
the idea of the A.I
10.What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.