Poetry Analysis

Ronald Mei
English 201
Professor Perry
25 April 2022

Poetry Analysis
The poem I have chosen to analyze is “Learning to love America” by Shirley Geok-Lin Lim. This poem stood out to me because I feel related to the poem. Lin Lim’s poem starts off the majority of the sentences with the word ‘because’, which made me think that she was going to explain her story as an immigrant. When Lin Lim’s poem talked about the ocean swept along the coastline, it made me visualize why my parent work so hard to get settled in America. The poem “Learning to Love America” brings up my feeling about America and things to look back at in the future.
Lin Lim uses a lot of imagery and identity throughout her poem. An example of imagery used in the poem would be, “because my senses have caught up with my body, my breath with the air it swallows, my hunger with my mouth”. Based on this stanza, we can visualize the feeling of Lin Lim’s current state. When it comes to identity, the title kind of represents it already. Lin Lim expresses how his son struggles to adapt to the American lifestyle. She also describes the imperfections of the United States, which also builds the connection with the reader through relatabilities.
A different poem by Shirley Geok-Lin Lim that grabbed my attention is called ” Mother to Son”. This poem’s aspiring tone was the main reason why it caught my attention. The way Lin Lim writes her poems makes it easy for readers to paint the image in their heads. A great example of this is ” Go now and learn it.” After reading this line, you feel like she’s talking to you and you start imagining it. When rereading the poem, you can get multiple meanings because of previous memories and combine the different elements.
Both poems ” Learning to Love America” and ” Mother to son” by Shirley Geok- Lin Lim show a connection between her and her son. In ” Learning to Love America ” described how his son is having a hard time adapting to being an “American”. Lin Lim wrote a response for her son in ” Mother in son “, where she says ” You must believe me when I tell you there is a deep secret you must learn, a secret that can never be shared.” Based on both these quote it shows that Shirley Geok Lin Lim likes to write about his son.
Shirley Geok Lin Lim’s poems express a message to readers and an experience. The poems Lin Lim writes feel super relatable and her other poems are probably similar. The two peom shows that Lin Lim isn’t afraid to express her feeling about being an immigrant. As an Asian American with immigrant parents, I admire her work.

                Work Cited

Geok-Lin Lim , Shirley. “Learning to Love America.” Poetry Out Loud, https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/learning-to-love-america/.

Foust, Rebecca. “Three Poems from Ars Poetica for the Day by Shirley Geok-Lin Lim: ‘The Well,” ‘the Glass of Wine,” and ‘Mother to Son’: Women’s Voices for Change.” Women’s Voices For Change | Redefining Life After 40, 1 Oct. 2017, https://womensvoicesforchange.org/three-poems-from-ars-poetica-for-the-day-by-shirley-geok-lin-lim-the-well-the-glass-of-wine-and-mother-to-son.htm.

How Similar Are You to the Adults Who Raised You?

The article I chose was “How Similar Are You to the Adults Who Raised You?”. I feel like I do have a lot in common with my parents, but since I’ve been growing up in America, I’ve definitely picked up some American traits. My parents adapted to some of my American traits, which is why they added more food dishes to their menu. The similarities in our family are definitely a good thing, but when it comes to competition, it can get hectic. I haven’t experienced what Ms. Grose went through, but my parents probably did and I will probably experience that when I become a dad since that’s a common feeling. There are traits that i dont see myself adapting to, which is being extremely cheap. There are benefits to being cheap, but being too cheap to the point of being unhealthy isn’t something I want to do. Ms. Grose should express her feeling with her child with no filter and be straight up open. I feel like when parents aren’t talking openly without a filter, it makes it less meaningful. When my parents addresses similarties, they often add a story to make it memorable.