Hi Angelica, I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the balance of femininity with a hard exterior, but also gives the reader an insight into the vulnerability this strong woman feels. The two closing lines “I’m on grown woman shit,” and “I am fallen” are my favorite lines from the poem because they evoke an emotional response from the reader and summarizes the poem as a whole.
Hi Angelica! Great poem, I had a good laugh!
thank you !!
Hi Angelica, I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the balance of femininity with a hard exterior, but also gives the reader an insight into the vulnerability this strong woman feels. The two closing lines “I’m on grown woman shit,” and “I am fallen” are my favorite lines from the poem because they evoke an emotional response from the reader and summarizes the poem as a whole.
thank you!!! 🙂
Hey Angelica,
Nice poem, as well as good linings which is creative and understandable.
thank you!
Hey Angelica, i enjoyed your poem! it makes me visualize a new yorker