7 thoughts on “erasure poem- Deborah Adekoya”

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  Trinasia Harper

  February 21, 2022 at 8:37 pm

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  Hello, I really liked your word choice. While reading your poem I found myself in somewhat deep thought and hanging on to every word.

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    Deborah AdekoyaPost author

    February 24, 2022 at 9:46 am

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    Thanks so much

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  angelica.singh001@stu.bmcc.cuny.edu

  February 21, 2022 at 11:47 pm

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  Hi, your word choice was amazing! I enjoyed reading this !

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  Calvin

  February 22, 2022 at 12:04 am

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  Great poem! The creative use of the words from the original seem very smooth while maintaining a new idea.

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  natalie hoosain

  February 22, 2022 at 12:16 am

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  loved the way you wrote this!

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  Sicong wu

  February 23, 2022 at 4:27 pm

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  Hi, I love the words you choose. It is easy to understand and amazing. Those words reminds me of the movie Le fabuleux destin d’Amélie Poulain.

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    Deborah AdekoyaPost author

    February 24, 2022 at 9:47 am

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    thanks I gotta check that out.

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