Hi Sicong, I really enjoyed the way you conveyed such a somber, dark emotion. The words really allowed me as a reader to create a picture in my mind of not only a feeling but the setting of the scene; “green/ city” and the mention of different birds (that also aid as symbols for the emotions). My favorite line was the one about sitting with noodles while it’s raining outside.
Hi, I found your word choice very interesting. I like how you took a somber approach to the poem.
Hi Sicong, I really enjoyed the way you conveyed such a somber, dark emotion. The words really allowed me as a reader to create a picture in my mind of not only a feeling but the setting of the scene; “green/ city” and the mention of different birds (that also aid as symbols for the emotions). My favorite line was the one about sitting with noodles while it’s raining outside.