I would give this essay an A+/A-. I think it shows a good example where it expressing Cairo’s argument, but still, showing how they still lean on the side of Adichie’s argument.
I would give this essay an A- or a B, because while reading this I can see that the writer is very educated on the topic/both sources, but they lack in text citations and quotes and or clear paraphrases. The author address both arguments and has counter arguments.
I honestly loved the formatting of the paper, it came off as a informative essay and not an argument. She did great explaining both point of views of the ideal of feminism. She actually explain Besty point better than Besty.
But for an overall grade I say A but informing me but a C because their wasn’t an argument.
The Intro was very well-written , and and I really like the choice of words that was used (Vocab). Although I was expecting to see more of an argument with the non-feminists side and, Like why you disagree. The grade I would give is a b-
For this essay I give (A) because it include both side (supporting feminism and not supporting feminism) in the introduction and then gives more detail in the other part of the essay.
i would give this essay maybe an B because the writer is very organized, and she explains every detail is explained very well and it goes well with her thesis, but they should of added more. the summary was good for both sides of the arguemnet. but they could of added more on this topic for pro feminisim
Id give this essay a b+ because the author gave credible sources and they summarized the ted talk entirely. I liked that they provided personal details and also the paraphrasing was good. The outline had a statement of purpose that informed us about which position they were advocating for. However, they did not give clear concrete evidence. It feels a bit more informative than a argumentative tone.
This essay gives a coherent argument, but in my opinion, this essay use too much paragraph to state introduction, not has strong personal opinion, but the organization is clear and vocabulary is academic. so A-
I would give this essay a B+, because the author brings up the argument in the introductions, but they don’t support the argument as much in the body paragraph.
I’ll give it around B+ or B , good language and explaining on Adichie and Cairo’s writing but not much personal opinion or experience to support it’s point.
17 thoughts on “Sample argument essay”
I would give this essay an A+/A-. I think it shows a good example where it expressing Cairo’s argument, but still, showing how they still lean on the side of Adichie’s argument.
I would give this essay an A- or a B, because while reading this I can see that the writer is very educated on the topic/both sources, but they lack in text citations and quotes and or clear paraphrases. The author address both arguments and has counter arguments.
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I honestly loved the formatting of the paper, it came off as a informative essay and not an argument. She did great explaining both point of views of the ideal of feminism. She actually explain Besty point better than Besty.
But for an overall grade I say A but informing me but a C because their wasn’t an argument.
The Intro was very well-written , and and I really like the choice of words that was used (Vocab). Although I was expecting to see more of an argument with the non-feminists side and, Like why you disagree. The grade I would give is a b-
I would give it an A because the writer explains the authors meaning of feminisim and gives a summary about the article.
I would give this a B because it does have a argument and everything was clear to understand what this author was talking about in this essay.
For this essay I give (A) because it include both side (supporting feminism and not supporting feminism) in the introduction and then gives more detail in the other part of the essay.
This essay has a very good introduction. It’s very well written and the author used both articles, I can give to this essay a (-A or B+.)
i would give this essay maybe an B because the writer is very organized, and she explains every detail is explained very well and it goes well with her thesis, but they should of added more. the summary was good for both sides of the arguemnet. but they could of added more on this topic for pro feminisim
Id give this essay a b+ because the author gave credible sources and they summarized the ted talk entirely. I liked that they provided personal details and also the paraphrasing was good. The outline had a statement of purpose that informed us about which position they were advocating for. However, they did not give clear concrete evidence. It feels a bit more informative than a argumentative tone.
This essay gives a coherent argument, but in my opinion, this essay use too much paragraph to state introduction, not has strong personal opinion, but the organization is clear and vocabulary is academic. so A-
I would give this essay a B+, because the author brings up the argument in the introductions, but they don’t support the argument as much in the body paragraph.
B, she included a lot of info but her argument wasn’t fully there.
I’ll give it around B+ or B , good language and explaining on Adichie and Cairo’s writing but not much personal opinion or experience to support it’s point.
I’ll give a B because we to review the argumentative part and for what i saw it need more quotes and a better explanation.
I would give this essay a B + because of lack of quotes and because it not really giving out an Argument essay