SPE 100-1203 (Sat)
Due date:
Completed IN CLASS
Sat Sep 10
SPE 100-1900 (M/W)
Due date:
Completed IN CLASS
Mon Sep 12
- If you missed this class, watch the following video: Principles of Public Speaking Outlines
- Complete the following activity in the comments below:
Pick one the essays at the following link and turn it onto a public speaking outline, following the principles outlined in the above video: “Personal Narrative Essays”
Paragraph 1
4th grade class
Lied about kissing her crush
& about having dinner w Katy Perry & lived in kie
Recess
23rd in line to throne in Monaco
Other kids bought into lie quickly
Wide eyes & child like naivety
Why I lie
Control my own life
Feeling of ecstasy
Changes
From tomboy to center of attention
Bad habit
Pathological lying turns into habit
Alcazar Gates , throne , robe & royalty
Fall of fame
2 girls bond over not being able to travel with their family
Has an epiphany and realized that people can be accepted without having fascinating stories about their life
Becomes a listener
Hello everyone/4th grade
Katy perry + Monaco
The rush of lying + how others reacted
Being GOOD at it
Walking the proverbial tightrope of keeping the lies alive
Analogies on Analogies
Painting the picture of change in mindset
Perspective
Mix of guilt, understanding, and beginning of taking accountability
In an eloquent way, close with me telling everyone the
TRUTH
4th grade
-Lied about kissing her crush
-Lied about having dinner w/Katy Perry + living in Kiev
Recess
-Lied abt being 23rd in line for the throne in Monaco
-Other bought into the lies quickly
-They had wide eyes + childlike naivety
Why I lie
-Control my own life
-Feeling of ecstasy
Changes
– Went from being a tomboy to egoistic
Bad Habit
-Pathologically lying = new norm
-Alcazar gates, throne, robe, feeling like royalty
Fall of fame
-A girl says she can’t travel with her family & another girl agrees/says the same
-Narrator = tried to outshine her but sees she’s being ignored
Realization
-Other ppl are normal and accepted without fabricating their lives
-Became a listener not a speaker/boastful
Pants Fire : Varya lied to her class about several things: kissing her crush, having dinner with katy perry , living in Kiev for two month
She was able to lie with ease, everyone believed her.
She lied for her enjoyment, lying made her feel in charge made her feel, and lying made her feel like she was creating life not just letting it pass by , an example she got a valentine from jason.
she became more than her tomboyish band geek appearance, her lies made her the topic of discussion at the lunch table
she lied religiously and unabashedly , her boredom vanished when she lied , and he felt as if when she stopped lying she would no longer be welcome or accepted and that thought kept her lying .
varya realized after listening to someone she idolized telling the truth about her situation that no one was ready to laugh or scold her for not living an extravagant life, and that made lies feel empty.
after seeing the repsonse the girl got form telling the truth varya began to listen instead of spinning stories and telling lies, and after absorbing all their tales she begin to tell the truth.
PANTS ON FIRE
– she lies and it just flows out of her mouth & everyone just believes her.
– She lies about being related to Britney Spears , about kissing a boy at the fence on a march morning, having dinner with Katy Perry, living in Kiev for two months & etc.
– she lies so she can have all the attention because that’s what she likes.
– all the things she thinks are negative, she realizes no one else thinks they are.
– she starts to notice people don’t have negative reactions and still treat each other nicely .
– she notices two girls still being friends and sharing even after one of them talked about her parents not being able to travel.
– people talk about things even if they are negative and they don’t judge each other.
– she starts to be honest about the things she had previously lied about.
Pants on Fire Public Speaking Outline
Hi everyone,
So, to get right into it I never really kissed a boy, never had dinner with Katy Perry or lived in Kiev for 2 months but these are all lies I told my 4th grade class.
I wanted to be popular so bad. The girls sitting next to me on the swing would just stare at me naively waiting for the next lie I would tell.
There was no real reason to lie. It was so intoxicating that I loved the attention I got from it. Watching the faces of the people I told light up at the different details.
I wanted to be more than who was on the outside. I wanted to hide the ordinary person I was.
Lying so much made my own life become second hand to me.
Pants on Fire
She lied about serval things such as having dinner with Katy perry & living in Kiev for 2 months. She didn’t get to kiss her crush.
She was able to lie with ease everyone believed her.
She lied for her own enjoyment she wanted to feel in powered or in charge or wanted people to believe she lived better life then one’s life that she admired .
She became more then just her tomboyish band geek appearance. Her lies made her the topic of discussion at the lunch table.
She still had no remorse for lying religiously. Her boredom would vanished if she was to stop lying she would no longer be welcome or accepted the people would no longer make room for her if they found out. that thought keep her lying.
Varya realized after listening to someone she idolized that truth about her life/situation that no one was no different for anyone. Nobody scolded her nor laugh for not living a exaggerate life it was all empty lies.
– i was a liar and I liked it. The feeling. The way it put me above & beyond.
– I lied about dinner with Katy perry
– I liked about living in Kiev
– to make it better those girls on the swing believed me
– lying made me more than I was, more to others speaking about me at lunch tables
– if I was to ever stop I wouldn’t be on top. I wouldn’t be that girl laughed with spoken about
– I’d be no one
-but i realized by others that they were accepted without lying. Without pretending
– I sat with girls listening to them tell their truths.
– so I told mine, Im not related to Britney spears
First Impressions
By Isabel Hui
I woke up August 4, 2016, there was one thing on my mind:what to wear. A billion thoughts raced through my brain as hangers in my closet shuffled back and forth. I didn’t to come off as a try-hard, but I cared for a good impression. it was my first day of high school, but it was my first day of school in a new state; first impressions are everything, and it was imperative for me to impress the people who I would spend the next four years with.
Pants on Fire
By Varya Kluev
Never kissed my crush
Never had dinner with Katy P. or lived in Live
But I said I did
Everyone believed my lies
I lied because I liked to and wanted attention
Everyone gave me that attention and spoke about me
I lied religiously
Thought of revealing myself
Decided not to
Fear of getting bullied
A friend revealed she wasn’t traveling
Others did the same
No negative reaction
I realized I didn’t need to lie
I started to tell the truth
There’s no need to lie for attention
-Saturday
-mall was full
– mom is short and easily overlooked
– we the window of the boutiques
– knowing we wouldn’t buy anything
– i would start to notice the people around me
– some ladies would work with high heels
-some men would smell of sharp cologne
– has an easy feeling on my chest that wouldn’t go away
– we were in a rich nieghborhood
I woke up for my first day of school a few years back.
didn’t know what to wear and was frantic
Nothing Extraordinary
By Jeniffer Kim
ENTERING THE MALL
– mall was packed
– mom is short, skinny and is nothing extraordinary to look at
– the daughter was ashamed of her mother
COMPARING HER MOM TO THE RICH WITH RESENT
– they live in a high-class neighborhood
– accusing eyes on the Mom -feeling they didnt belong there.
-She wore cheap, ragged clothes with seams torn, shoes with soles worn down
-didn’t want to be seen with her,
REALIZES HER MOMS SACRIFICES
-She spent her money buying me new ones.
-Mother was beautiful and extraordinarily wonderful in my eyes.
-no longer ashamed of her, but of myself.
The Main paragraph is about what to wear.
What clothes will be impressive on the first day of high school,
August 4
first day of school
-outfit ideas that are going to stand out
-calm fit not try hard
New school
-first impressions on people
–
what to wear
– dont wanna seem like a slob
– august 64, 2016
– first day of school
August 4, 2016
– Find an outfit
– Messy closet
– First day of school
– Recently Moved
– Good first impression
– Neat uniform outfit
What to wear
the person in this story, Isabel, Was worried about how to dress properly for first impressions. She’s was nervous because this is her first time attending school in a different state so she’s really concerned about her appearance.
First Impressions by Isabel Haul
It’s Isabels first day of school and she’s wants to wear something nice.
-first impression of highschool
Deciding what to wear
What can make a good outfit
My thoughts- by Isabel Hui
I woke up August 4, 2016
What to wear
Need to dress nice
First day of high school
New state
First impressions
Who will spend the next 4 years with
First day of high school
– woke up August 4
– went through clothes
– million thoughts
– new state
– impress people
– private school (plaid skirts)
*first day of high school outfit.
– august 4, 2016
-closet full of cloths
– not trying to be a try hard
– first day of highschool
-me and my brother was at the mall
– getting something to eat a drinks
– but we didn’t have money to get anything
` somebody help us.
*First Day
-August 4, 2016
-don’t come off as try-hard
-impress the people next 4 years
-first impressions are everything
First impressions
By Isabel Hui
-8/4/16,
-first day of high school in a new state…
-what to wear?
-impression is everything since it’s gonna be 4 years.
– horrendous matching plaid skirts used in private school doesn’t seem so bad now.
2018
Senior year
Soccer academy tournament
Last year playing soccer
Became team captain
First game won, second lost, third won and fourth won
Made it semifinals
Trouble with semifinals
Pass the semifinals
Two weeks later the finals
We played the finals
Trouble scoring
Mistakes with playing
And scored last minute
Won the school academy tournament
Nothing extraordinary
By Jeniffer Kim
-Saturday weather
It was either sunny or cloudy she can’t remember which
-Roasting mom
Her mother is short and skinny
She is very easy to overlook and not notice
-taking a stroll through the mall
With her mom she was walking by the shops in the mall peeking in at the stores through the windows
-taking a peep at people
She started to look at people passing by but then payed more attention to what they were wearing
-Unbearable chest pain
She started to develop an uneasy feeling in here chest which was get worst in time for it to just being ashamed of her mother
-Ashamed beings near her mother
She was running away from here mother cause she didn’t want to be seen with her cause of how she looked
-trying to find her mother
After coming back from running away she lost her mother and searched stores to find her
-Words died in her throat
She found her mom in a expensive clothes store holding someone very pricey but her mom wanted to buy it for and she felt stunned seeing her mother all tired and worn out from overworking but willing to buy this for her