Back then, women were oppressed and had to abide by the males in their lives’ wishes. In “The Wife” the woman is stripped of her identity when she is married off and abides by her husband’s wishes. In “The Story of an Hour”, Mrs. Mallard’s husband dies and she becomes distraught with grief at first and end up mourning the loss of her husband. After she is over the initial shock and mourn, she locks herself in her room and ends up realizing that she is free of him and doesn’t have to abide by his every whim. Both characters are in similar situations in feeling trapped in their marriages and end up realizing how dim their personalities are in said marriages. In, “The Wife” she ends up mentioning giving up “the playthings of her life” in this sense she means everything that makes her, her including most of her personality and in “The Story of an Hour” she mentions on how dim her personality gets with being married off and spending the rest of her life trying to please a man that doesn’t love her and ends up realizing she has “a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely.” They are both inherently sad deep down and know that marriage traps them.
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Hey Angela,
I could agree both stories explain how unhappy married women have to follow society’s norms. Both women dislike marriage because it takes away their freedom and traps them. The stories explain life back then and how women were belittled, while men were looked as “gods”. Mrs. Mallards finally has freedom when she finds out her husband “dies”. Emily doesn’t like that she has to get married and live by her husband’s expectations.
Although she was shocked to learn of her husband’s reported death, I agree with your assessment. While standing by the window again in her room, she realized how wonderful it was to be free again and not live for anyone but herself.
Hi Angela,
The response is presented logically and has captured the similarities between the two presented readings. I agree with the arguments that marriage institutions in both “The Wife” and “ The story of an Hour” are the real causes of gender discrimination. Irrespective of the latter strength, the response contains logical long sentences. To improve the response, consider simplifying the long sentences. Overall evaluation of the essay illustrates a good understanding of the presented reading