In Essay one I learned my mistakes from my feedback because writing an essay has been a while. Also in my fall semester in English 101 I had the same essay problems. One of them is writing present tense, vocabulary and unclear sentences. Learning my mistakes are being repetitive I was gladly to learn from my mistakes and I’m planning to go to the writing center to learn and better my writing. One thing about my writing I share my writing and reading the feedbacks from my professors. Reading the feedbacks makes me want to write more into my writing and making it more interesting. Learning more about literature makes want to improve into my writing and vocabulary, so one thing I started doing is reading and words I don’t understand I write in a notebook. Afterwards, writing the words I understand the words to make the reading easier for I to understand the reading. Applying dictionary and reading into my literature makes me want to to write poetry. Poetry is beautiful way to express within oneself emotions.
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Hello Hilda, I make a lot of mistakes too and can really relate to your discussion post. I really love poetry and find it such a beautiful expression as well. I loved last week’s class. I received. a lot of feedback even after putting a lot of work into my essay. I realize it is going to take a lot of work out of me just to pass this class and that is ok. I have to remember that doing my best is what matters and that some subjects are harder for me than others and that over time I will get better at what I’m doing. Thanks for your post.