My experience writing essay 1 was interesting. However, I found it very difficult to find things that could be improved in the sample student essay, resulting in my essay lacking some details. I would find myself getting writers block and running out of things to mention or how to fully explain what I’m trying to note. I was focusing more about making sure I formated by essay correctly to avoid doing mistakes that the sample wriritng showed. What I learned through this process is how important it is to start drafting and fromating essays. I also realized how easy it is to stray away from what the actually question is asking and include information that isn’t needed. In some ways the assignment might change how I approach a future writing and focusing more on making sure the writing is more consistent, rather than switching from different topics. In addition learning more about grammar and how to expanded my vocabulary without using my sounding like its “too much” or “unnecessary”.
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Octavia, thanks for the good observations. It’s a complicated assignment. First, students have to understand the story. They also have to understand the Rader article and the directions given to the student.