Week 5 Discussion board
My essay was a successful one and I also learned a lot about writings. I have learned that there’s a lot of ways that I can improve my writing and to follow instructions and stay on tracks. One thing I learned is that it’s important to be very specific and use quotations the proper way. I have learned that vocabulary and grammar are very important especially when you are transitioning from one part to another. based on the feedback that I have received personally I believe that I can improve more by working on my THESIS statement and try not to be repetitive. This experience also helps me see things from a teacher perspective on how to get the job done correctly and effectively. One last thing that stood out to me the most is to always check my work based on the essay rubric grade sheet and always check if I followed the instruction that was given to me before I submit my work. Well, it was a successful one to me because I tried my best but I also learn that there’s room for more improvement, In the future I will apply what I have learned from my essay 1 feedback to improve my writing skills and get a better grade.
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Hello Senghor, I like that you mentioned about the transition. I had a problem with that last semester, I would go from singular to plural and back to singular like it is nothing lol I also agree with the Thesis part – it’s hard not to be repetitive when in conclusion we need to sum up everything without saying the same thing we said in the thesis statement. My entire work was based on instructions, I literally went step by step, and it paid off. Let’s stay focused and next essay we will do even better!