In the student essay about “Araby” by James Joyce, the student should specify the human condition that is being discussed. Also, the sentence is vague and doesn’t go into details, backing what the student is trying to comply. The student also doesn’t explain how the author encourages readers to examine the details that is being mentioned. If I was to rewrite in a way that offers specific details, I would include how the author encourages readers. I would also include the human conditions to give the readers an insight of the story more. I would explain how the narrator’s character is intricate, that would give more background information about the narrator to better help explain to someone who hasn’t read the story. Overall, the student’s sentence needed a few specific details to get the perfect sentence.
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Falaq, your comments are good, but the prompt asks students to actually write a sentence they would use to replace the one given.