After reading “The Lesson” by Toni Cade Bambara, I would write more about details in character development regarding Sylvia and how she came to be more aware of her socio-economic situation with little conversation. Sylvia was the leader of her group, smarter than the rest, and was afraid to go into the store but at first was unaware why. She was able to realize that she did not have the types of funds to pay for expensive toys. The price of those toys was the price to feed her entire family. She did not ask her mother about the money, but was knew exactly what she would say, showing that she understood that her family could not afford those kinds of luxuries. Miss Moore knew this about Sylvia, and by directing her questions at her, she showed the reader that she wanted Sylvia to realize the true lesson she was trying to teach the group without speaking further on it. From there, she was able to piece her future together and decide that she would not feel that way again when she grew up. The title that I would give this essay is “Character Analysis of Sylvia in ‘The Lesson’”.
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Tess, your title, while not exactly exciting, does express the ideas you discuss in your post, focusing on the character of the narrator. I like how you juxtapose Miss Moore’s character with Sylvia’s. In a way, the two characters are in a kind of emotional battle with each other during the course of the story. About titles—and this applies to everyone, not just you—remember that it is the first thing readers see when they approach an essay. An original/unusual title can lure readers into an essay. Please be sure to include your name in the title of your post. Thanks!
I agree with your analysis of Sylvia’s character development in “The Lesson” by Toni Cade Bambara is truly impressive. Your keen observations and thorough exploration of Sylvia’s increasing awareness of her socio economic status through subtle cues and interactions captivated my attention, your insightful examination of Sylvia’s leadership abilities, intelligence, and gradual recognition of her family’s financial difficulties enriched my understanding of her character. Your proposed title of ‘Character Analysis of Sylvia in ‘The Lesson’ aptly captures the core of your essay.
I totally agree with you, Sylvia was the leader of her group and she was able to understand and realize the harsh reality of life, I also agree that Miss Moore knew exactly how Sylvia is and rather than explaining everything to her in words she gave them a lesson through the trip which helped Sylvia understand this and keep in mind that her life growing would be far better than this. The trip led to her determination and motivation for the better of her future.