In writing Essay 1, I realized that my Essay 1 is kind of short. My response to the student sample was primarily based on what I observed, and I followed the assignment instructions closely to identify what the student sample essay might have missed. However, I struggled to find additional points to elaborate on, which resulted in a less developed argument. I noticed that while I wrote extensively in the second paragraph, the first and third paragraphs were quite brief. This imbalance made my essay feel incomplete. I also overlooked the proper format for my Works Cited page; I didn’t include a hanging indentation, which I now understand is an important formatting detail. Through this experience, I plan to take more time during the drafting process to expand my ideas, and ensure each paragraph is fully developed for my future essay and add a hanging indentation for the works cited.
Daily Archives: October 7, 2024
I wanted to come back to this Discussion after seeing the importance of participating and reading my classmates comments. The overload of school work and job balance i mainly didn’t understand if we had to write about OUR EXPERIENCE essay or STUDENT SAMPLE for this week.However, i did wanted to write about student sample. So here it goes. When i read “Beauty” as part of the title i was okay,maybe student is talking about the beauty of the men that the villagers mainly the woman were admiring.I wanted to keep going with the title. As i kept reading i was getting supper confused and noting made sense.At the same time,I felt very glad about my self because maybe I didn’t do as well on my essay, I do have a hug gap of continues improvement but i knew not even half way that this student used some source of AI.The huge abuse on these technologies is concerning into a certain point. I will dedicate more time in my ENGLISH work and will start participating actively in our discussion boards and will start enjoying this class with this community that we are building. I loved Jacob’s answer to discussion board on week 5.
I acknowledge that we have a lot of time to do our essays however, these topics are really hard for me to wright about. Sometimes I don’t know where even to start.I like reading but sometimes these types of literatures i find very hard to understand and to write about. Towards the end i clearly understood and found a topic to write about for the essay 1 . I feel i need a more practice on my writing skills so i can keep improving. As one of my classmates wrote, practice makes perfect.When it comes in citations i find it very hard to move back and forth with two story’s . After my essay one is revised i will sit down and see where i need to improve.I will also, keep reading all the material that the professor provides. I need a lot of more practice and more reading and time management in this course.
