Writing Essay 1 taught me how important it is to have an established thesis statement. At first, I believed I could sum up the narrative without presenting a strong argument, but this criticism made it clear to me that the essay is guided by an insufficient basis. I’ve also discovered that providing numerous quotes and in-depth research are essential for bolstering my arguments.
There was one instance in particular where I used a quote but forgot to clarify its meaning. This helped me realize that I need to make a connection between the quote and my main point in order to make it meaningful.
In order to make sure I have a strong thesis and an obvious organizational framework, I intend to devote more time to outlining my essays in the future. Additionally, I’ll make sure to
Increase the amount of supporting details and proof in each area of the essay; I’ve found that this makes the essay considerably stronger. This assignment has undoubtedly altered my writing style by putting more emphasis on the coherence and depth of my ideas.
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Berfin, this post does not give any specific details about writing this particular essay in which you were asked to evaluate a student essay. It does not address the prompt for the week.