I compared Raymond Carver’s simple writing to “The Lesson” by Toni Cade Bambara. I like both the worter because they both uses simple day to day language for there writing.Bambara our narrator lives in poor neighborhood she learn there economically equality and social injustice that people habe there. In many sentencse he uses and continuously to make the language easy for the people. In the sentence “So we heading down the street and she’s boring us silly about what things cost and what our parents make and how much goes for rent and how money ain’t divided up right in this country” (Bambara.). I think this is the easiest language i have seen i like the story most. The lesson is same like this it is very easy langiage to understand.
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I totally agree with you, Toni Cade and Raymond Carver can be compared together as they both use simple writing to engage in their articles that expand the understanding more clearly They use language that helps us read it through as if we were speaking.
Stephanie, you have to do more than just agree with another student. Try to move the conversation along with your comments.