Daro wade
Professor .Barnes
04/28/2022
Research:Literacy history project.
Before identifying a minority community that has been affected by the institutionalization of literacy in The United States . I’ll have to introduce the definition of literacy. What is literacy? Why must one need literacy in their life ? What is a life without literacy? First “literacy is the ability to read and write “ but for me literacy is the ability to identify things or understand things , interpret , or create or be able to use technology etc….
One must need literacy in their life because I feel like it’s for survival, I think you can’t get a decent job without at least not having the ability to communicate or compute or understand how things work. LITERACY is the kingdom of “being literate.” Literacy is described by way of a combination of basic abilities (now not simply one skill) that everyone needs so that you can be characteristic in society. If you are from another country and need to be comfy in your new cultural area and want to take benefit of all the possibilities right here and make it your property, then you’ll be required to grow to be “literate.”
If you stay in this usa and feel that you have been deprived educationally, then you definitely too may need to brush up on your literacy talents. You’re probably asking why ?Because elementary knowledge abilities will allow you to express your ideas, to answer questions, to process new facts, and to believe the experience about you much better. Literacy still will manage smoothly for the added community to believe you. Literacy gives you information and the skill to share and express this information accompanying added population.
Literacy again gives you the skill to sustain information being influenced to you by added folk. In these habits, learning shows immunity – independence for you to go to the place you are going to fall on the planet, and to inquire about excuses so that you take your next steps. Literacy too admits freedom to find you! Literacy is rescuing cause it opens dismissal from responsibility to your future. If you do not have the fundamental knowledge abilities therefore you can never know the value of growth that you inquire or get.
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Identifying a minority community that has been affected that has been affected by the institutionalization of literacy .( this is my draft what I’ve started so far )
2 thoughts on “Week 11; rough draft”
Dear Daro,
I just wanted to mention how I believe what you have written so far should belong to the “opinion” or “point of view” section of your paper. Although, the part where you inquired about “what is literacy?” can go into the “history” section of your paper where you can explain how literacy does not have a definition, perhaps, and go on to explain your topic while making sure to leave your thoughts towards the end of your paper where the “opinion” section may be. Aside from this, in your introduction, make sure to include the fact that this paper may be susceptible to biased ideas as your opinion will be included in the paper. Overall, you have a good start of your paper and remember to cite information and be more specific with your central idea or statement of purpose. Keep up the work!
– Deleny Leon
1. Does the author clearly state the purpose of the essay? Explain.
Ans: The author does state the essay will be Identifying a minority community that has been affected that has been affected by the institutionalization of literacy.
2. Does the author describe their research methods? Explain.
Ans: The author has not gotten there yet and has not quote anything or any sources.
3. Does the author state the central idea of the essay? Explain.
Ans: The Author sates in the beginning that it is going to be about Identifying a minority community that has been affected by the institutionalization of literacy.
4. Does the author support the central idea with relevant evidence? Explain.
Ans: The author has not gotten to that point yet.
5. Does the author interpret relevant evidence? Explain.
Ans: The author doesn’t have any piece of evidence yet.
6. Does the author reference at least one course material? Explain.
Ans: The author did use some of the thing we talked about in class like the meaning of literacy and other thing but there is no direct quotes from sources we used in class.
7. Is the essay well-organized? Explain.
Ans: So far, it is well-organized and well-written, however I felt like the paragraphs are too short and should be connected.
8. Are the grammar, syntax and vocabulary consistent and appropriate with a college-level essay? Explain.
Ans: Everything looks good in terms of grammar, syntax and vocabulary consistent but in some sentences it was hard to understand.
9. What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
Ans: The strength of this draft is how detailed it is and how it explained every point made.
10. Do you have any other comments or suggestions?
Ans: I enjoyed the essay and am looking forward to reading the finished product, however I believe the author spent too much time on the introduction, which isn’t always a negative thing since as long as the introduction and the central idea are connected, it will be fine.