Part 1/ Introduction
This essay will dive into literacy inequity in New York City while focusing on segregation, access, and funding within the public school system.
The focus, or thesis as it were, is that while New York is one of the most diverse and progressive cities in the country, it still suffers from a cycle of segregation in its public school system from child care to high school education.
I selected to focus on New York’s public school system for a few reasons. Firstly, I am here and can see firsthand the different schools, and the examples of segregation. New York is so diverse, and despite pride in that, the government agencies that run our schools fail to break a cycle of literacy inequality. Different neighborhoods in New York have their own dialects and that is a beautiful silver lining to different literary curriculums, but the fact is that access is immensely unequal. Specifically, the specialized high school system in NYC means that students are put in hyper-competitive positions to gain access to legitimately good literary education, but those students are already either advantaged or disadvantaged based on their elementary and middle school districts. Since I grew up in a small town in Wyoming, the idea of applying to public school felt alien to me when I first learned about it from friends and family in New York. In my hometown, everyone went to one public school and that worked well. I was interested to see the effects of this specialized schooling system, as well as the inequality simmering below in districting and funding.
I began my research by looking into the DOE. Surprised by what I found, I decided to hone in on the disparities between claims of the DOE and what is true. While my research isn’t complete, I plan to continue focusing on the myriad effects of the NYC public school system and how this affects the future of literacy of black communities in New York City.
Part 2
This article explains how the specialized high school system is flawed and frankly, racist. Students are screwed by the DOE from an extremely young age so that by the time the specialized high school testing comes, they aren’t prepared. This article states that only 7 of 762 Stuyvesant High School (the best public high school in NY) admits were black.
Part 3
My project will aim to be a counter-narrative. When I researched I noticed that the first resources that come up about specialized high schools specifically are super positive. The DOE is proud of the system it runs, and many leading New York academics tout its success, but there are many elephants in the room. Namely, the fact that the DOE doesn’t give all of its students equal access to literature, equal teacher-to-student ratio, equal funding, or anything really from an extremely young age. And even when the hegemonic side acknowledges this, it almost always comes down to economics, rather than acknowledging the racial and ethnic divides in its districting.
Part 4
“With COVID-19, The African-American Literacy Crisis Will Get Much Worse”
This article, which was assigned in week 10, discusses the many ways in which Black students are at a disadvantage. The article itself focuses on how COVID made that problem even worse but also focuses on the importance of child care. Pre-K is the least equally funded element of the New York public education system and affects Black students the most. This article provides evidence of how the cycle is perpetuated and Black students don’t find themselves with the resources to succeed down the line. Hence performing poorly on specialized high school entrance exams.
Part 5
Everyone should care about this if they want NYC to live up to its hype as a diverse, progressive city where anyone can make it. As long as there is segregation and inequitable funding in our schools the problems only get worse. For one of the most diverse cities in the world, New York forgets about many of its own based on where they grew up, which usually means, based on their race.
2 thoughts on “Mya Barrie Essay Outline”
Does the author clearly state the purpose of the essay? Explain
Yes, I feel that Mya has outlined perfectly her intentions with her essay and why its important to her and why it should be important to us.
Does the author clearly state which essay option they have selected? If so, which one is it?
Yes she chose option two which is to outline the literacy landscapes in a sub diverse community
Does the author describe their research methods? Explain.
She started by looking into the DOE and plans to continue researching the claims coming from them and what is actually being practiced in the education system.
Does the author state the central idea of the essay? Explain.
Yes, she states clearly in the beginning, “the focus, or thesis as it were, is that while New York is one of the most diverse and progressive cities in the country, it still suffers from a cycle of segregation in its public school system from child care to high school education.”
Does the author support the central idea with relevant evidence? Explain.
Mya included an article to start research support. In the article it explains how the DOE and school system is flawed and racist and how it effects students from a young age that carries into their future learning and literacy.
Does the author interpret relevant evidence? Explain.
Yes I think the article that is present in the outline is a perfect start to what she is trying to explain for her paper.
Does the author reference at least one course material? Explain.
She chose to remind us of the subject matter in week 10 that highlighted how COVID 19 effected African American communities. It is a perfect reference as NYC has a huge African American community and can directly link to her paper that has the potential to open our minds to the realities of the school system here in NYC.
Does the author reference hegemonic or counternarrative discourse? Explain.
Mya explains her paper is counter-narrative. She researched and initially noticed that the first resources that come up about specialized high schools are positive. She explains that the DOE is proud of its system regardless of the flaws, namely the lack of equal access to literature, equal funding, and student to teacher ratio.
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
Its very well outlined and extremely clear. I think she created great frame work for herself and it makes me excited to see her point of view as well as her research.
Does the author clearly state the purpose of the essay? Explain.
To remove “segregation and inequitable funding” from NYC schools.
Does the author clearly state which essay option they have selected? If so, which one is it?
Option 3: Literacy History Project
Does the author describe their research methods? Explain.
The author plans on using research from the Department of Education
Does the author state the central idea of the essay? Explain.
Yes, it is to focus on New York’s division of educational distribution
Does the author support the central idea with relevant evidence? Explain.
Yes, the information comes directly from admission reports and differences between actual disparities and claims from the DOE.
Does the author interpret relevant evidence? Explain.
Yes, in-person knowledge of what the author sees here in New York.
Does the author reference at least one course material? Explain.
She referenced the article “With COVID-19, The African-American Literacy Crisis Will Get Much Worse” and mentioned the disparities of blacks during COVID and in pre-k.
Does the author reference hegemonic or counternarrative discourse? Explain.
Hegemonic due to prejudiced resource distribution by the DOE.
What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.
It explains the disparities in NYC schools and the need for reforms and equality.
Do you have any other comments or suggestions?
No