Draft 4 (final ):
A wildlife preservationist who wants to protect grizzly bears from extinction spends years studying and living with them in Alaska, but while he aims to protect these beasts, he may not be able to protect himself from them.
Final draft with markings:
A WILDLIFE PRESERVATIONIST who wants to protect grizzly bears from extinction spends years studying and living with them in A l a s k a, but while he aims to protect THESE BEASTS, he may not be able to p r o t e c t h i m s e l f f r o m t h e m.
Draft 3:
A wildlife preservationist regularly visits the Alaska wilderness to advocate for these animals, but is his commitment to preserve these beasts too dangerous for his own preservation?
Draft 2:
A grizzly bear lover visits the Alaska wilderness to advocate for these animals, but is his commitment to preserve these beasts too dangerous for his own preservation?
Draft 1:
An advocate for the preservation of grizzly bears spends years living with and videotaping grizzlies in the Alaska wilderness in an effort to advocate for the animals, but is his commitment to preserve these beasts too dangerous for his own preservation?
