Category: Submissions

Final Draft: To salvage her career, an overlooked reporter goes undercover in a Brooklyn church linked to missing women and must secretly document its criminal operation before its charismatic leader realizes she isn’t there to be saved.

6^th draft: To salvage her career, an overlooked reporter goes undercover in a Brooklyn church tied to missing women, and must secretly document its criminal operation before its leader realizes she isn’t there to be saved.

5^th draft: To save her career, an ambitious reporter goes undercover inside a Brooklyn church tied to missing women, but as the cult’s charismatic leader draws her in and she begins to crave the belonging it offers, she must gather evidence and escape before she becomes the next woman to disappear.

4^th draft: To save her career, an ambitious reporter goes undercover inside a Brooklyn church rumored to be tied to missing women, only to discover it is a front for a trafficking operation; trapped inside, she must gather evidence and escape before she becomes the next woman to disappear.

3^rd draft : To save her dying career, an ambitious reporter goes undercover in a secretive church, only to discover it’s a front for a brutal drug cartel; trapped inside, she must gather evidence and escape before she becomes the next missing person.

2^nd draft: Desperate for a meaningful story, a ruthless journalist infiltrates a cult only to find their message appealing, until she witnesses a brutal murder that forces her to choose between her own salvation and her survival.

1^st draft: A young female New York City journalist is set to infiltrate an infamous religious cult to expose their leader, only to find herself agreeing with their ideologies; she must face the truth about her past before she puts her career and life at risk.

Final draft – When a Portuguese inventor in his late 20s, living in Astoria, is about to declare his love to his longterm best friend, he sees her boyfriend suddenly propose to her, which forces him to choose either to break or fall into his old patterns.

Final draft with marking points –  When A PORTUGUESE INVENTOR IN HIS LATE 20S, l i v i n g   i n  A s t o r i a,  is about to declare his love to his longterm best friend, he sees HER BOYFRIEND SUDDENLY PROPOSES TO HER, which forces him to c h o o s e  e i t h e r  t o  b r e a k  o r  f a l l  i n t o  h i s  o l d  p a t t e r n s.

Draft 5 – When a 26-year-old inventive Portuguese man is about to give a special gift to his longtime best friend for whom he’s been in love with,   he is interrupted by a surprising event which forces him to  choose to either break or fall into his old patterns.

Draft 4 – When a 26-year-old inventive Portuguese man gets what looks like an invitation to his longtime best friend’s wedding, he must decide either to declare the reality of his feelings or have to live knowing he let her marry the wrong man.

Draft 3 – When a 28-year-old inventive Portuguese man gets what looks like an invitation to his longtime best friend’s wedding, he must decide either to confront the reality of his feelings or avoid it.

Draft 2 – When a Portuguese 28y man gets his childhood best friend’s wedding invitation for whom he is in love, he must decide either to confront reality or escape it.

Draft 1 – A 28-year-old introverted Portuguese man raised in Queens, is about to move to another continent on the wedding day of his childhood best friend, with whom he is secretly in love, until he finds a note that drives him to overcome time and declare his love.

 

Final Draft 
After accidentally killing his son, a Long Island pediatrician seeks redemption by traveling to The Bronx to help former gang members, drug addicts, and single mothers, still his need to save others begins to consume him.

Final Draft with Markings 
After ACCIDENTALLY KILLING HIS SON (inciting incident), a LONG ISLAND PEDIATRICIAN (protagonist)SEEKS REDEMPTION (want) by TRAVELING TO THE BRONX TO HELP FORMER GANG MEMBERS, DRUG ADDICTS, AND SINGLE MOTHERS (action), but HIS NEED TO SAVE OTHERS BEGINS TO CONSUME HIM (antagonist).

Draft 4 
After accidentally killing his son, a Long Island doctor will go to any lengths to redeem himself, even risking his own safety as he ventures into the Bronx to help former gang members, drug addicts, and struggling single mothers.

Draft 3
After accidentally killing his son, a Long Island doctor finds salvation in healing, helping, and uplifting those in desperate need.

Draft 2 
After the loss of his son, a Long Island doctor finds purpose in healing, helping, and uplifting others.

Draft 1 
A grieving father turns pain into purpose: Dr. Greg Gulbransen’s mission to heal others reveals the power of empathy, resilience, and human connection.

Draft 1- A married best-selling author falls deeply in love with a financially struggling woman who battles addiction, forcing her to confront her own destructive dependence on love and people in the East Village block.

Draft 2- A best-selling author wanting love but ends up as a caretaker for her broke, addict partner.

Draft 3-  A married, celebrated writer who published a global bestseller seemed so put together but falls deeply in love with a financially struggling woman who battles addiction, forcing her to confront her own destructive dependence on love and people.

Draft 4- A married American writer, who has published numerous books, is celebrated for her 2006 book, which became a global bestseller. Despite appearing put together, she falls deeply in love with a financially struggling woman who battles addiction, forcing her to confront her own destructive dependence on love and people.

Final logline – A Brazilian accountant turned entrepreneur fights the lack of Latin American representation in global fashion in an attempt to make her heritage known.

Final logline with marks – A BRAZILIAN ACCOUNTANT TURNED ENTREPRENEUR fights THE LACK OF LATIN AMERICAN PRESENTATION IN GLOBAL FASHION in an attempt to m a k e  h e r  h e r i t a g e  k n o w n.

Logline 4 –  A Brazilian accountant turned entrepreneur fights the lack of Latin American Fashion in an attempt to make her heritage known.

Logline 3 –  After quitting her stable job and its security, a Brazilian entrepreneur desires to make her culture worldly known through fashion despite the lack of Latin culture representation.

Logline 2 – Brazilian entrepreneur attempts to escape the corporate career cliche, desiring to unleash her creativity despite previous failure.

Logline 1 – A Brazilian entrepreneur escapes the corporate career cliche; instead, she makes her culture widely known through fashion.