1. The assignment I feel I did best on was Essay 3. I followed the instructions carefully and made sure things matched the requirements. I felt comfortable with the topic and how I organized my ideas. I put effort in this work and it turns out successful that I am so joyful.
2. I think I could have done better on Essay 1. At the beginning of the course, I was so confused with the instructions. Writing essays in English was hard for me and my brain was lack of ideas. Although I had a chance to edit it, I rushed the writing and didn’t spend enough time revising. If I had planned more and reviewed the feedback closely, I could have made the essay clearer and more focused.
3. One important thing I learned this semester is how to follow assignment instructions closely and organize my writing better. I now understand how important it is to connect my ideas clearly and support them with good examples.

2 thoughts on “Week 15 Discussion _ Hsu Wai Phyar”
hi Hsu, I agree with your 3 point, i also struggled to understand fully the assignment instructions and would right rough drafts and try to organize it in simple standard english and call it a day. But after this class I learned to pay closer attention to each assignment description and take my time through them to ask questions and seek help if needed. Especially when organizing a clear essay and structuring that while getting all your points across. Wishing you well for next semester!!
Hsu, thank you for comments. Essay 1 was complicated, and I can understand that it could be confusing. As your colleague Hilda notes, however, you should never be afraid to ask questions is you don’t understand something.