{"id":951,"date":"2023-04-18T13:32:14","date_gmt":"2023-04-18T17:32:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/esl-96-1803-spring2023-your-reading-and-writing-class\/?p=951"},"modified":"2023-04-18T13:33:31","modified_gmt":"2023-04-18T17:33:31","slug":"peer-review-3","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/esl-96-1803-spring2023-your-reading-and-writing-class\/2023\/04\/18\/peer-review-3\/","title":{"rendered":"Peer Review 3: In class on 4\/18"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

Read 2 classmates’ drafts and comment on them by commenting on their post and answering the peer review questions below: <\/mark><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Peer Review 3       \/ Argument Essay           <\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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  1. Does the draft include an introduction? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  2. Is there a clear, arguable thesis statement? If so, copy it here. If not, explain.  <\/li>\n\n\n\n
  3. Does each body paragraph begin with a topic sentence that supports the thesis? Explain.  <\/li>\n\n\n\n
  4. Does the draft include brief summaries of the 4 required sources: Source 1<\/strong>:\u00a0Key Findings About U.S. Immigration<\/a>, PEW Research Center + Source 2<\/strong>: \u201cCompetition from Within<\/a>,\u201d by Seth Eislund\/ The Immigrant Story + Source <\/strong>3: your interview your classmates about their immigrant experience and your own experience + Source 4<\/strong>: select 1 article from The Immigrant Story? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  5. Are the summaries in the author\u2019s own words? Provide an example.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  6. Does the draft include an analysis of the 4 sources? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  7. Does the analysis support the thesis? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  8. Does the draft include quotes from the 4 sources? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  9. Does the draft include the author\u2019s analysis of the quotes? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  10. Does the author avoid plagiarism?<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  11. What are the strengths of this draft? Explain.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  12. What suggestions do you have for improving this draft? Explain.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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