{"id":307,"date":"2021-07-14T15:43:36","date_gmt":"2021-07-14T19:43:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/crt-100\/?page_id=307"},"modified":"2023-04-14T08:48:01","modified_gmt":"2023-04-14T12:48:01","slug":"module-11-breathe-and-revise","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/module-11-breathe-and-revise\/","title":{"rendered":"Week 11: Breathe and Revise"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<h1 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Activity 1: Self-care<\/h1>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/live.staticflickr.com\/65535\/49014103951_d0d564f46e_b.jpg\" alt=\"Self-Care | A word cloud featuring &quot;Self-Care&quot;. This image i\u2026 | Flickr\" width=\"460\" height=\"231\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">What can you do to relax? If you know, do it. Otherwise search for options.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h1 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Activity 2: Watch this. <\/h1>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Watch this YouTube video on self-care:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed is-type-video is-provider-youtube wp-block-embed-youtube wp-embed-aspect-16-9 wp-has-aspect-ratio\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"14 Self-Care Tips for College Students\" width=\"1140\" height=\"641\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/pIkr8-BOcfU?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; clipboard-write; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture; web-share\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<h1 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Activity 3: Revise<\/h1>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-medium-font-size wp-block-paragraph\">What can you do to revise your essay? Some ideas: read your classmates&#8217; comments on your draft, review my comments on your outline, visit the Writing Center, read some sample essays, and double check our essay requirements. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-medium-font-size wp-block-paragraph\"><mark class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-cyan-blue-color\">Here is the argument essay checklist: <\/mark><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><tbody><tr><td>Does your essay include a clear, arguable conclusion\/ thesis? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does your essay include a compelling introduction that establishes the topic of the essay, includes background information on your topic, and narrows the focus to the thesis\/ conclusion? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does each of your body paragraphs include clear topic sentences\/ premises that relate to the thesis and clearly identify the focus of the paragraph? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does your essay include an opposing viewpoint followed by your refutation, in which you point out possible sources of bias, fallacies, and errors in thinking? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Is your essay addressed to a specific group or person? Do you keep your audience in mind throughout the essay? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does your essay include a compelling closing paragraph that represents your thesis but is not simply repetitive? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does your essay include at least three secondary sources from BMCC databases? Are all sources relevant to your thesis? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Does your essay include a thorough analysis of your sources and attention to reliability, validity and accuracy of the sources, without replacing your own voice? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Do you acknowledge your sources through properly formatted citations using MLA style and a properly formatted works cited page? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Is your final draft 4-5 pages in length (+ a works cited page)? <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Did you submit all required drafts, including your outline, draft for peer review? Will you submit the final draft according to guidelines? (In Microsoft Word, double-spaced, as an attachment, etc?) <\/td><\/tr><tr><td>Is your writing focused and revised, with no errors in grammar, punctuation, and word usage? <\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<h1 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Activity 4: Submit your essay on <a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/ssologin.cuny.edu\/cuny.html?resource_url=https%3A%2F%2Fbbhosted.cuny.edu%252F\" target=\"_blank\">Blackboard<\/a> by Wednesday, April 19th. <\/h1>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-cover is-light\"><span aria-hidden=\"true\" class=\"wp-block-cover__background has-background-dim\"><\/span><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1280\" height=\"662\" class=\"wp-block-cover__image-background wp-image-595\" alt=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/1763\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280.png\" data-object-fit=\"cover\" srcset=\"https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2885\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280.png 1280w, https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2885\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280-300x155.png 300w, https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2885\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280-1024x530.png 1024w, https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2885\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280-768x397.png 768w, https:\/\/openlab.bmcc.cuny.edu\/critical-thinking-crt-100-0507-spring23-prof-barnes-asynch\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2885\/2021\/08\/abstract-background-4675153_1280-570x295.png 570w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1280px) 100vw, 1280px\" \/><div class=\"wp-block-cover__inner-container is-layout-flow wp-block-cover-is-layout-flow\">\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center has-large-font-size wp-block-paragraph\"><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You have worked hard.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Now it&#8217;s time to showcase your work. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I can&#8217;t wait to read it. <\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Activity 1: Self-care What can you do to relax? If you know, do it. Otherwise search for options. Activity 2: Watch this. Watch this YouTube video on self-care: Activity 3: Revise What can you do to revise your essay? 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